Video 1
Due to couldn't get the most suitable actor, we went to Kedah for our Final video shooting.
Our Final Video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9tLpy9tqsQ4
LOGLINE , SUMMARY, SCREENPLAY of the short film
1. Logline means : The storyline explained in 2 sentences.
2.SUMMARY means : The whole story.
3.THe ScreenPlay mean the whole story with the dialogue,setting,camera angle,camera movement and the framing.(include all the setting )
LOGLINE :
Jason received a puppy from her mother and then he had to move out.Lastly he meet Max again.
TREATMENT /SUMMARY:
There was a town in the middle of the forest .
A boy named Jason was born in that small town. Jason had no friends because he is very shy of making friend. Every day, he just sit in front of his house and watching others child playing together. Loneliness and sadness happened upon him.
“I wish I could be the one of them,” he said to himself in his heart.
His mother observed the entire situation.
“We have to do something for him,”
So his mother and father decide to give him a surprise on his 12th year old birthday.
The day passes quickly and finally reaches the day of his birthday. Jason just celebrates his birthday with his mother and father. A small party inside a small house which is feels very harmony.
“Come here, boy. Take a look at what we bought gift to you!” His mother gives him a surprise which is a lovely puppy as him birthday present!
“Oh my! It’s a puppy!” That is a big surprise for him!
Jason was dancing and jumping all around the house. He was full of joyfulness!
“Max! Max! This is your name. Isn’t it’s a good name?” He directly named the puppy called “Max”.
That night, they playing together with the puppy and everyone feel great. Before going to bed, Jason holds Max and goes to his parent’s bedroom.
“Thank you so much mom and dad. Thanks for everything. I love you so much” He thanks his parent for what they did for him on his birthday, especially his birthday present, Max.
“As long as you are happy, my dear. But promises me, you must take good care of Max. He is your friend now.” His mother tells him to take good care of the puppy and mention him the puppy was now his friend.
That night, Jason sleeps with Max beside him.
The next day, Jason wake up and found that the puppy already missing.
“Max! Max! Where are you?” He quickly jumped out of his bed and looking for the puppy.
Then he finally found that Max was sleeping below his bed with a softly-looking carpet.
“There you are, little one,”
He smile and try to stretch out his hand to reach the puppy.
Then, the puppy suddenly moves away and then wake up at the moment where Jason stand up and try to give up.
“Son, come down and have your breakfast now!” Jason doesn’t realize that the puppy is wake up.
“Coming, mom !” He goes toward the door and decided to go downstairs for breakfast.
Suddenly the puppy runs and stops in front of him.
“Ah, you scared me!” Jason was shocked for awhile and then squatting on the floor. The puppy saw his owner and its tail keeps swaying until Jason hugs it. “Come on, mom was calling us. Let’s go down for breakfast.”
Jason brings him to downstairs and breakfast together. He feed Max with some dog food. “Here, Max. Have some milk.” He also shared some of his glass of milk with Max. Max really like it! “Do you still want some milk?” Jason opened the fridge to get some milk again but his mother told him not to give Max so much because its stomach will easily get full.
“Son, it’s enough for Max. We don’t have to give Max drink too much milk as it will easily get full.” “Oh, well.” Then, Jason had no idea so he decides to take Max to the blue prairie behind his house.
“Come on, Max! Catch me! Catch me! Haha,” Jason keeps running around the blue prairie while Max is following behind of him. They feel so freedom. “Lets rest for a while, Max.”
After both of them are tiring of running, Jason lying down on the grass and Max comes nearer to him.
“Hey, Max. Thanks for your arrival in my life. I am glad i meet you,” Jason is patting Max head and telling him that he is very happy for the arrival of Max.
These few days, Jason feel very enjoy with Max. Every time when Jason are free, they will go and play together or running around and chasing around at the blue prairie .
But , sometimes in the evening, Jason still sitting in front of his house and watching other children playing soccer or any game that attract his attention. Max seems like realizing something and then he walks toward to the children which Jason watching far away from his house.
“I must do something for my little master,” Max thinks in its mind.
After few minutes later, Jason noticed the group of children come toward his house and looking for him. “Huh? Why are they coming to my house? Are they coming for me? Are they going to invite me to play with them? What should I do?” Jason feels shy and quickly hides inside the house and close the door.
Next, he hears the voice coming very near to him.
“Hey, we are watching you for a long time ago. But we don’t know even if you want to join us or not, so..., do you want to join us play?”
The child who is from the village knocks the door and then asks Jason to come out and play with them.
“What did he say just now!?He IS INVITING ME!?”
Jason was shocked. It is UNBELIEVABLE for them to become friend with him.
Jason wants to make sure does the words said by the child outside whether true or false.
“Er... erm... are you …are you serious? Can…can I play with you? Who can tell me that I’m not dreaming,” He asks the children again and looking of the true answer.
“Hahaha, what are you talking about? Of course you're not dreaming. Hurry up and come out play! Lets be friends!”
Then the children ask him to come out and play with them. Furthermore, they wish they could be friend with Jason.
“It’s not a dream! They want to make friends with me! They are inviting me to play with them!” Jason finally opened the door and then smile with them.
“Lets go,” He slowly walks down the short stairs outside his house and join in their soccer game.
Starting from the day that Jason make new friends, Jason play different game with his new friends every evening after he come back from school.
Day by day passes, the time Jason playing with Max is decreasing. The relationship between Jason and Max are keep fading out.
Max feels very sad and lonely when he sits inside the house and watching Jason and his new friends playing games outside. Before this, Jason will keep feeding Max with some delicious food and a bowl of fresh milk that he secretly takes the milk from the refrigerator without asking his mother. But now the situation had already changed. Jason almost forgets about Max. He feel Max is very disturbing and annoying.
“What’s wrong buddy? Still scare to sleep alone? But you are a big boy now. Hurry up and come down from my bed to sleep,” Sometimes Max wanted to sleep beside him but Jason ask him to get off from his bed.
“Why little master don’t want to play with me and sleep with me anymore?” Max was very sad and sleep lonely below Jason bed.
One day, his mother tells Jason and asks Jason not to break the promise that he wanted to take good care of Max. “Come over here, son. Did you still remember what did you promised me on the first day you meet Max? You promise me to take good care of it as your friend.” His mother also tells him to appreciate what he has now.
“I’m sorry, mom. I shouldn’t have ignored Max because making new friends with others,” Jason feel wrong and go to hug Max and apologize to Max.
That night, Jason learn a lesson from his mother which is he have to appreciate what he have now. “Max, come on to my bed and sleep with me tonight. Sorry for ignoring you this few days. I won’t do that anymore. Tomorrow lets go play together”
Jason patting Max head and keep on apologizes to Max. He really loves Max very much. He plan to bring Max to a place tomorrow where he secretly found a field which is full of colorful flower just like a heaven. “Good night, Max. I love you,” That night he hugs Max and sleep well for the first time they ever sleep so well.
“Honey, are you in there?” Suddenly, his mother knocks the door and comes in Jason bedroom. Jason saw his mother come in and then he jump down from his bed and stand there while her mother are moving towards him until her stand in front of Jason.
"Honey, I have a good news and a bad news to tell you."
"Well,the good news is daddy had brought a second-hand condominium in the city.Of course, by your uncle's help. So, we're going to move soon," His mother tells him that his father managed to get a half price for the second-hand condominium in the city by the help of the Jason uncle. This is a rare opportunity furthermore is a good chance for them to moving out to a better place and have a better lifestyle in the city.
"But the bad news is...we can't bring Max come with us," His mother feels sorry to him.
"What !? Max can't come with us? But he is my friend! My buddy!" Jason was shocked by the time his mother say moving out and still they can't bring Max to go with them. He is going to miss Max a lot! He sure will miss Max because Max is his best friend and he promise to take good care of Max.
"Mom, is it real that we can't bring Max with us?" Jason ask his mother either it is true or not.
"Honey, I know you can't accept it. But we have no choice. Now, hurry up and start packing up your things.We are going to move out this evening," His mother answering him and tell him started go to packed him thing and they going to move out this evening.
"What!? This evening!? Why such in a hurry?" Jason thought they will be moving out in this few day or week then surprisingly is today evening!
"No, I don't want to! I wan't to be with Max forever! I don't want to leave without it!" Jason refuses to pack his thing and crying in his room. He is going to miss his house, the blue prairie, the secret garden, and his new friends and most importantly is his BEST FRIEND, Max!
" I don't want to leave you...Max..." Jason cannot control his emotion .After his mother appeasing he, he stop crying and obediently pack his things quickly before his mother get mad with him.
"Is it still anything left?" they are doing the final check. After they finished packing, they need to move on.
"Max..." Jason cannot accept this reality. All this had come so fast until he cannot accept it in this few minutes and even in this few hours. Jason stands in front of Max and watching it.
" Don't look at me like that, Max. I don't want to separate with you too." Jason can feel the sadness through Max eyes. It is really hard for Jason to say goodbye to Max. But, Jason has to accept the harsh reality.
"Max, sit down. Don't follow me anymore." He order Max to sit there and not to follow him after this.
"Honey, hurry up and get into the car.We're moving now," This time, His mother tell Jason quickly go into the car because it is about to leave now.
"Max, I promise you i will come back here on weekend to see you." He whispering to Max and promise that he will come here secretly once a week during weekend.
"Goodbye, Max. Please don't hate me," Jason say goodbye and the tear comes out. He is left and Max sitting there alone.
After Jason family moving out, Jason will secretly come out from his new house and take his bicycle to go back to his old house and playing with Max.
"Max, do you missed me? I miss you so much!" Jason promise that they relationship won’t fading out again. Jason goes to his old house once a week during weekend. But, due to the school assignment, Jason doesn’t have much time and unable to have a chances to play with Max.
"Honey, you must finish your assignment or else you are not allow to go out," His mother also keeps watching him and become very strict about his attitude and his academic.
"Max, I miss you," This make him so stress and he don’t have free time to play with Max at his old house.
After half year has past, it is December. Jason was having a school holiday .He took advantages of this opportunity to go back to his old house to find Max. It’s been a long time he didn’t see Max. He is very worried about Max. By the time he reached the old house, he could see Max lying in front of the door from far away.
"Max! Max! I' m back," When he reached the front door, suddenly an old man appears from his behind.
" Poor little thing, didn't it? Its owner move away half year ago and leave it here. Well, at first its owner still come back and play with it.But don't know why after few weeks later,he didn't come anymore." The old man explain to Jason that after the owner don’t come to visiting him and play with him, he just sitting there and keep hoping and waiting for the owner to come to him because it believes what the owner said. After listening from the old man, Jason feels very guilty and says sorry to Max.
" Max, I'm so sorry. Sorry to keep you waiting for so long," He goes and hugs Max as the old man finished explaining.
"Hey young boy, what are you doing?" The old man was shocked when he saw Jason is hugs Max which is still sleeping.
"Young boy, hurry up and let go of it or you will be in trouble!" The old man quickly tells Jason to let it go and stop hugs Max again when he is still sleeping.
"What are you talking about? I'm its owner !Max is my best friend!" But, Jason feels weird and thinks that is non-sense to let an owner to hugs his puppy. After that, Jason keep on apologize to Max and hugs Max tightly in his hand .Suddenly, Jason feel something weird.
"Ewww, whats that smell?" Something puffy which can be feeling by his hand and the smell like faeces comes out. Finally he realizes that it was Max. Max excretes out his faeces on his hand! Jason was speechless for a moment. And then Max was waked up. Finally, Jason asks where Max learns this bad habit.
"Max, since when did you learn to excretes out your faeces on people?"
SCREENPLAY:
For example :
Scene 1
Storyline:There was a town in the middle of the forest .A boy named Jason was born in that small town.
Setting: Village
Camera angle:High angle.
Camera movement:Tilt down from up and slowly dolly in to the small house .
Framing: Establishing shot.
Scene 2
Storyline:Jason had no friends because he is very shy of making friend. Every day, he just sit in front of his house and watching others child playing together. Loneliness and sadness happened upon him.
Setting:Village ,in front of his house .
Camera angle: Eye-level
Camera movement: Slowly dolly in to his face.
Framing: Full shot of him and then dolly in and ended when reached Jason MCU.
Dialogs: “I wish I could be the one of them,” he said to himself in his heart.
Scene 3
Storyline: His mother observed the entire situation. So his mother and father decide to give him a surprise on his 12th year old birthday.
Setting : Inside Jason house .
Camera angle: Eye-level.
Camera movement: Fixed camera.
Framing: 3/4 rear of his mother .
Dialogs: “We have to do something for him,”said by his mother.
Scene 4
Storyline: The day passes quickly and finally reaches the day of his birthday. Jason just celebrates his birthday with his mother and father. A small party inside a small house which feels very harmony.
Setting: Outside Jason house.
Camera angle: low angle.The grass become the foreground and the background is Jason house.
Camera movement : from low angle then tilt up until slightly high angle .
Framing: Establishing shoot
Dialogs:
Jason's mother: “Come here, boy. Take a look at what we bought gift to you!”
Scene 5
Storyline : His mother gives him a surprise which is a lovely puppy as him birthday present!
Setting : Jason house
Camera angle: eye level of Jason
Camera movement: Fixed camera
Framing: profile shot of him and the profile shot of her mother legs.
Dialogs:
Jason: “Oh my! It’s a puppy!”
Scene 6
Storyline : That is a big surprise for him! Jason was dancing and jumping all around the house. He was full of joyfulness!
Setting: inside Jason house and at the sofa.
Camera angle : high level .
Camera movement: slightly below the top view (high angle)
Framing : full shot of Jason, the small puppy ,his mother and his father. All is top view.
Dialogs:
Jason: “Max! Max! This is your name. Isn’t it’s a good name?” He directly named the puppy called “Max”. That night, they playing together with the puppy and everyone feel great.
Scene 7
Storyline : Before going to bed, Jason holds Max and goes to his parent’s bedroom.
Setting : Jason house , inside his mother bedroom.
Camera angle: low angle
camera movement:first low angle by following Jason motion and then become eye level of Jason.
Framing:
1. LS and FS of the Jason and puppy , LS of Jason's mother and father .
2.OTS of his mother (high angle) while she is replying to Jason.
3. 3 shoot(Jason,Jason's mother and the puppy)
Dialogs:
Jason : “Thank you so much mom and dad. Thanks for everything. I love you so much” . He thanks his parent for what they did for him on his birthday, especially his birthday present, Max.
Jason's mother : “As long as you are happy, my dear. But promises me, you must take good care of Max. He is your friend now.” His mother tells him to take good care of the puppy and mention him the puppy was now his friend.
Scene 8
Storyline: That night, Jason sleeps with Max beside him.
Setting: Inside Jason bedroom.
camera angle: high level
Camera movement: slowly tilt down then dolly in to Jason's bed.
Framing: FS of Jason and Max which are sleeping .
Scene 9
Storyline: The next day, Jason wake up and found that the puppy already missing.
Setting : Jason bedroom
Camera angle: Eye level of Jason
Camera movement : pan left from right follow by Jason movement .
Framing : LS and MFS of Jason.
Dialog:
Jason: “Max! Max! Where are you?” He quickly jumped out of his bed and looking for the puppy.
Scene 10
Storyline: Then he finally found that Max was sleeping below his bed with a softly-looking carpet.
Setting : Jason bedroom
Camera angle : POV of Jason
Camera movement: handheld (POV)
Framing :POV of Jason, and FS of Max .
Dialog :
Jason : “There you are, little one,” He smile and try to stretch out his hand to reach the puppy. Then, the puppy suddenly moves away and then wake up at the moment where Jason stand up and try to give up.
Jason's mother : “Son, come down and have your breakfast now!” Jason doesn’t realize that the puppy is wake up.
Scene 11
Storyline : He goes toward the door and decided to go downstairs for breakfast.
Setting : Jason bedroom.
Camera angle : eye level
Camera movement : fixed camera
Framing : MS of Jason which show the backside of him .
Dialog:
Jason: “Coming, mom! ”
Scene 12
Storyline : Suddenly the puppy runs and stops in front of him. Jason was shocked for awhile and then squatting on the floor. The puppy saw his owner and its tail keeps swaying until Jason hugs it.
Setting : At the back of his bedroom door.
Camera angle : Eye level
Camera movement: POV of Jason.
Framing: FS of Max.
Dialog:
Jason : “Come on, mom was calling us. Let’s go down for breakfast.”
Scene 13
Storyline: Jason brings him to downstairs and breakfast together. He feed Max with some dog food.
Setting : At the staircase of his house.
Camera angle:from low angle.
Camera movement: First is fixed camera after he go down and toward the kitchen the camera panning to left follow by his motion.
Framing:First is FS ,LS after that become MFS,then MCU by the time he turns to his right .
Scene 14
Storyline: Jason shared some of his glass of milk with Max.
Setting: In the kitchen
camera angle : Eye level
Camera movement : POV of Jason
Framing: FS of Max
Dialog
Jason : “Here, Max. Have some milk.” After that Max really like it !
Jason : “Do you still want some milk?”
Scene 15
Storyline : Jason stand up and move toward the refrigerator . Jason opened the fridge to get some milk again but his mother told him not to give Max so much because its stomach will easily get full.
Setting : In the kictchen
Camera angle: Eye level
Camera movement: POV of Jason
1. Logline means : The storyline explained in 2 sentences.
2.SUMMARY means : The whole story.
3.THe ScreenPlay mean the whole story with the dialogue,setting,camera angle,camera movement and the framing.(include all the setting )
LOGLINE :
Jason received a puppy from her mother and then he had to move out.Lastly he meet Max again.
TREATMENT /SUMMARY:
There was a town in the middle of the forest .
A boy named Jason was born in that small town. Jason had no friends because he is very shy of making friend. Every day, he just sit in front of his house and watching others child playing together. Loneliness and sadness happened upon him.
“I wish I could be the one of them,” he said to himself in his heart.
His mother observed the entire situation.
“We have to do something for him,”
So his mother and father decide to give him a surprise on his 12th year old birthday.
The day passes quickly and finally reaches the day of his birthday. Jason just celebrates his birthday with his mother and father. A small party inside a small house which is feels very harmony.
“Come here, boy. Take a look at what we bought gift to you!” His mother gives him a surprise which is a lovely puppy as him birthday present!
“Oh my! It’s a puppy!” That is a big surprise for him!
Jason was dancing and jumping all around the house. He was full of joyfulness!
“Max! Max! This is your name. Isn’t it’s a good name?” He directly named the puppy called “Max”.
That night, they playing together with the puppy and everyone feel great. Before going to bed, Jason holds Max and goes to his parent’s bedroom.
“Thank you so much mom and dad. Thanks for everything. I love you so much” He thanks his parent for what they did for him on his birthday, especially his birthday present, Max.
“As long as you are happy, my dear. But promises me, you must take good care of Max. He is your friend now.” His mother tells him to take good care of the puppy and mention him the puppy was now his friend.
That night, Jason sleeps with Max beside him.
The next day, Jason wake up and found that the puppy already missing.
“Max! Max! Where are you?” He quickly jumped out of his bed and looking for the puppy.
Then he finally found that Max was sleeping below his bed with a softly-looking carpet.
“There you are, little one,”
He smile and try to stretch out his hand to reach the puppy.
Then, the puppy suddenly moves away and then wake up at the moment where Jason stand up and try to give up.
“Son, come down and have your breakfast now!” Jason doesn’t realize that the puppy is wake up.
“Coming, mom !” He goes toward the door and decided to go downstairs for breakfast.
Suddenly the puppy runs and stops in front of him.
“Ah, you scared me!” Jason was shocked for awhile and then squatting on the floor. The puppy saw his owner and its tail keeps swaying until Jason hugs it. “Come on, mom was calling us. Let’s go down for breakfast.”
Jason brings him to downstairs and breakfast together. He feed Max with some dog food. “Here, Max. Have some milk.” He also shared some of his glass of milk with Max. Max really like it! “Do you still want some milk?” Jason opened the fridge to get some milk again but his mother told him not to give Max so much because its stomach will easily get full.
“Son, it’s enough for Max. We don’t have to give Max drink too much milk as it will easily get full.” “Oh, well.” Then, Jason had no idea so he decides to take Max to the blue prairie behind his house.
“Come on, Max! Catch me! Catch me! Haha,” Jason keeps running around the blue prairie while Max is following behind of him. They feel so freedom. “Lets rest for a while, Max.”
After both of them are tiring of running, Jason lying down on the grass and Max comes nearer to him.
“Hey, Max. Thanks for your arrival in my life. I am glad i meet you,” Jason is patting Max head and telling him that he is very happy for the arrival of Max.
These few days, Jason feel very enjoy with Max. Every time when Jason are free, they will go and play together or running around and chasing around at the blue prairie .
But , sometimes in the evening, Jason still sitting in front of his house and watching other children playing soccer or any game that attract his attention. Max seems like realizing something and then he walks toward to the children which Jason watching far away from his house.
“I must do something for my little master,” Max thinks in its mind.
After few minutes later, Jason noticed the group of children come toward his house and looking for him. “Huh? Why are they coming to my house? Are they coming for me? Are they going to invite me to play with them? What should I do?” Jason feels shy and quickly hides inside the house and close the door.
Next, he hears the voice coming very near to him.
“Hey, we are watching you for a long time ago. But we don’t know even if you want to join us or not, so..., do you want to join us play?”
The child who is from the village knocks the door and then asks Jason to come out and play with them.
“What did he say just now!?He IS INVITING ME!?”
Jason was shocked. It is UNBELIEVABLE for them to become friend with him.
Jason wants to make sure does the words said by the child outside whether true or false.
“Er... erm... are you …are you serious? Can…can I play with you? Who can tell me that I’m not dreaming,” He asks the children again and looking of the true answer.
“Hahaha, what are you talking about? Of course you're not dreaming. Hurry up and come out play! Lets be friends!”
Then the children ask him to come out and play with them. Furthermore, they wish they could be friend with Jason.
“It’s not a dream! They want to make friends with me! They are inviting me to play with them!” Jason finally opened the door and then smile with them.
“Lets go,” He slowly walks down the short stairs outside his house and join in their soccer game.
Starting from the day that Jason make new friends, Jason play different game with his new friends every evening after he come back from school.
Day by day passes, the time Jason playing with Max is decreasing. The relationship between Jason and Max are keep fading out.
Max feels very sad and lonely when he sits inside the house and watching Jason and his new friends playing games outside. Before this, Jason will keep feeding Max with some delicious food and a bowl of fresh milk that he secretly takes the milk from the refrigerator without asking his mother. But now the situation had already changed. Jason almost forgets about Max. He feel Max is very disturbing and annoying.
“What’s wrong buddy? Still scare to sleep alone? But you are a big boy now. Hurry up and come down from my bed to sleep,” Sometimes Max wanted to sleep beside him but Jason ask him to get off from his bed.
“Why little master don’t want to play with me and sleep with me anymore?” Max was very sad and sleep lonely below Jason bed.
One day, his mother tells Jason and asks Jason not to break the promise that he wanted to take good care of Max. “Come over here, son. Did you still remember what did you promised me on the first day you meet Max? You promise me to take good care of it as your friend.” His mother also tells him to appreciate what he has now.
“I’m sorry, mom. I shouldn’t have ignored Max because making new friends with others,” Jason feel wrong and go to hug Max and apologize to Max.
That night, Jason learn a lesson from his mother which is he have to appreciate what he have now. “Max, come on to my bed and sleep with me tonight. Sorry for ignoring you this few days. I won’t do that anymore. Tomorrow lets go play together”
Jason patting Max head and keep on apologizes to Max. He really loves Max very much. He plan to bring Max to a place tomorrow where he secretly found a field which is full of colorful flower just like a heaven. “Good night, Max. I love you,” That night he hugs Max and sleep well for the first time they ever sleep so well.
“Honey, are you in there?” Suddenly, his mother knocks the door and comes in Jason bedroom. Jason saw his mother come in and then he jump down from his bed and stand there while her mother are moving towards him until her stand in front of Jason.
"Honey, I have a good news and a bad news to tell you."
"Well,the good news is daddy had brought a second-hand condominium in the city.Of course, by your uncle's help. So, we're going to move soon," His mother tells him that his father managed to get a half price for the second-hand condominium in the city by the help of the Jason uncle. This is a rare opportunity furthermore is a good chance for them to moving out to a better place and have a better lifestyle in the city.
"But the bad news is...we can't bring Max come with us," His mother feels sorry to him.
"What !? Max can't come with us? But he is my friend! My buddy!" Jason was shocked by the time his mother say moving out and still they can't bring Max to go with them. He is going to miss Max a lot! He sure will miss Max because Max is his best friend and he promise to take good care of Max.
"Mom, is it real that we can't bring Max with us?" Jason ask his mother either it is true or not.
"Honey, I know you can't accept it. But we have no choice. Now, hurry up and start packing up your things.We are going to move out this evening," His mother answering him and tell him started go to packed him thing and they going to move out this evening.
"What!? This evening!? Why such in a hurry?" Jason thought they will be moving out in this few day or week then surprisingly is today evening!
"No, I don't want to! I wan't to be with Max forever! I don't want to leave without it!" Jason refuses to pack his thing and crying in his room. He is going to miss his house, the blue prairie, the secret garden, and his new friends and most importantly is his BEST FRIEND, Max!
" I don't want to leave you...Max..." Jason cannot control his emotion .After his mother appeasing he, he stop crying and obediently pack his things quickly before his mother get mad with him.
"Is it still anything left?" they are doing the final check. After they finished packing, they need to move on.
"Max..." Jason cannot accept this reality. All this had come so fast until he cannot accept it in this few minutes and even in this few hours. Jason stands in front of Max and watching it.
" Don't look at me like that, Max. I don't want to separate with you too." Jason can feel the sadness through Max eyes. It is really hard for Jason to say goodbye to Max. But, Jason has to accept the harsh reality.
"Max, sit down. Don't follow me anymore." He order Max to sit there and not to follow him after this.
"Honey, hurry up and get into the car.We're moving now," This time, His mother tell Jason quickly go into the car because it is about to leave now.
"Max, I promise you i will come back here on weekend to see you." He whispering to Max and promise that he will come here secretly once a week during weekend.
"Goodbye, Max. Please don't hate me," Jason say goodbye and the tear comes out. He is left and Max sitting there alone.
After Jason family moving out, Jason will secretly come out from his new house and take his bicycle to go back to his old house and playing with Max.
"Max, do you missed me? I miss you so much!" Jason promise that they relationship won’t fading out again. Jason goes to his old house once a week during weekend. But, due to the school assignment, Jason doesn’t have much time and unable to have a chances to play with Max.
"Honey, you must finish your assignment or else you are not allow to go out," His mother also keeps watching him and become very strict about his attitude and his academic.
"Max, I miss you," This make him so stress and he don’t have free time to play with Max at his old house.
After half year has past, it is December. Jason was having a school holiday .He took advantages of this opportunity to go back to his old house to find Max. It’s been a long time he didn’t see Max. He is very worried about Max. By the time he reached the old house, he could see Max lying in front of the door from far away.
"Max! Max! I' m back," When he reached the front door, suddenly an old man appears from his behind.
" Poor little thing, didn't it? Its owner move away half year ago and leave it here. Well, at first its owner still come back and play with it.But don't know why after few weeks later,he didn't come anymore." The old man explain to Jason that after the owner don’t come to visiting him and play with him, he just sitting there and keep hoping and waiting for the owner to come to him because it believes what the owner said. After listening from the old man, Jason feels very guilty and says sorry to Max.
" Max, I'm so sorry. Sorry to keep you waiting for so long," He goes and hugs Max as the old man finished explaining.
"Hey young boy, what are you doing?" The old man was shocked when he saw Jason is hugs Max which is still sleeping.
"Young boy, hurry up and let go of it or you will be in trouble!" The old man quickly tells Jason to let it go and stop hugs Max again when he is still sleeping.
"What are you talking about? I'm its owner !Max is my best friend!" But, Jason feels weird and thinks that is non-sense to let an owner to hugs his puppy. After that, Jason keep on apologize to Max and hugs Max tightly in his hand .Suddenly, Jason feel something weird.
"Ewww, whats that smell?" Something puffy which can be feeling by his hand and the smell like faeces comes out. Finally he realizes that it was Max. Max excretes out his faeces on his hand! Jason was speechless for a moment. And then Max was waked up. Finally, Jason asks where Max learns this bad habit.
"Max, since when did you learn to excretes out your faeces on people?"
SCREENPLAY:
For example :
Scene 1
Storyline:There was a town in the middle of the forest .A boy named Jason was born in that small town.
Setting: Village
Camera angle:High angle.
Camera movement:Tilt down from up and slowly dolly in to the small house .
Framing: Establishing shot.
Scene 2
Storyline:Jason had no friends because he is very shy of making friend. Every day, he just sit in front of his house and watching others child playing together. Loneliness and sadness happened upon him.
Setting:Village ,in front of his house .
Camera angle: Eye-level
Camera movement: Slowly dolly in to his face.
Framing: Full shot of him and then dolly in and ended when reached Jason MCU.
Dialogs: “I wish I could be the one of them,” he said to himself in his heart.
Scene 3
Storyline: His mother observed the entire situation. So his mother and father decide to give him a surprise on his 12th year old birthday.
Setting : Inside Jason house .
Camera angle: Eye-level.
Camera movement: Fixed camera.
Framing: 3/4 rear of his mother .
Dialogs: “We have to do something for him,”said by his mother.
Scene 4
Storyline: The day passes quickly and finally reaches the day of his birthday. Jason just celebrates his birthday with his mother and father. A small party inside a small house which feels very harmony.
Setting: Outside Jason house.
Camera angle: low angle.The grass become the foreground and the background is Jason house.
Camera movement : from low angle then tilt up until slightly high angle .
Framing: Establishing shoot
Dialogs:
Jason's mother: “Come here, boy. Take a look at what we bought gift to you!”
Scene 5
Storyline : His mother gives him a surprise which is a lovely puppy as him birthday present!
Setting : Jason house
Camera angle: eye level of Jason
Camera movement: Fixed camera
Framing: profile shot of him and the profile shot of her mother legs.
Dialogs:
Jason: “Oh my! It’s a puppy!”
Scene 6
Storyline : That is a big surprise for him! Jason was dancing and jumping all around the house. He was full of joyfulness!
Setting: inside Jason house and at the sofa.
Camera angle : high level .
Camera movement: slightly below the top view (high angle)
Framing : full shot of Jason, the small puppy ,his mother and his father. All is top view.
Dialogs:
Jason: “Max! Max! This is your name. Isn’t it’s a good name?” He directly named the puppy called “Max”. That night, they playing together with the puppy and everyone feel great.
Scene 7
Storyline : Before going to bed, Jason holds Max and goes to his parent’s bedroom.
Setting : Jason house , inside his mother bedroom.
Camera angle: low angle
camera movement:first low angle by following Jason motion and then become eye level of Jason.
Framing:
1. LS and FS of the Jason and puppy , LS of Jason's mother and father .
2.OTS of his mother (high angle) while she is replying to Jason.
3. 3 shoot(Jason,Jason's mother and the puppy)
Dialogs:
Jason : “Thank you so much mom and dad. Thanks for everything. I love you so much” . He thanks his parent for what they did for him on his birthday, especially his birthday present, Max.
Jason's mother : “As long as you are happy, my dear. But promises me, you must take good care of Max. He is your friend now.” His mother tells him to take good care of the puppy and mention him the puppy was now his friend.
Scene 8
Storyline: That night, Jason sleeps with Max beside him.
Setting: Inside Jason bedroom.
camera angle: high level
Camera movement: slowly tilt down then dolly in to Jason's bed.
Framing: FS of Jason and Max which are sleeping .
Scene 9
Storyline: The next day, Jason wake up and found that the puppy already missing.
Setting : Jason bedroom
Camera angle: Eye level of Jason
Camera movement : pan left from right follow by Jason movement .
Framing : LS and MFS of Jason.
Dialog:
Jason: “Max! Max! Where are you?” He quickly jumped out of his bed and looking for the puppy.
Scene 10
Storyline: Then he finally found that Max was sleeping below his bed with a softly-looking carpet.
Setting : Jason bedroom
Camera angle : POV of Jason
Camera movement: handheld (POV)
Framing :POV of Jason, and FS of Max .
Dialog :
Jason : “There you are, little one,” He smile and try to stretch out his hand to reach the puppy. Then, the puppy suddenly moves away and then wake up at the moment where Jason stand up and try to give up.
Jason's mother : “Son, come down and have your breakfast now!” Jason doesn’t realize that the puppy is wake up.
Scene 11
Storyline : He goes toward the door and decided to go downstairs for breakfast.
Setting : Jason bedroom.
Camera angle : eye level
Camera movement : fixed camera
Framing : MS of Jason which show the backside of him .
Dialog:
Jason: “Coming, mom! ”
Scene 12
Storyline : Suddenly the puppy runs and stops in front of him. Jason was shocked for awhile and then squatting on the floor. The puppy saw his owner and its tail keeps swaying until Jason hugs it.
Setting : At the back of his bedroom door.
Camera angle : Eye level
Camera movement: POV of Jason.
Framing: FS of Max.
Dialog:
Jason : “Come on, mom was calling us. Let’s go down for breakfast.”
Scene 13
Storyline: Jason brings him to downstairs and breakfast together. He feed Max with some dog food.
Setting : At the staircase of his house.
Camera angle:from low angle.
Camera movement: First is fixed camera after he go down and toward the kitchen the camera panning to left follow by his motion.
Framing:First is FS ,LS after that become MFS,then MCU by the time he turns to his right .
Scene 14
Storyline: Jason shared some of his glass of milk with Max.
Setting: In the kitchen
camera angle : Eye level
Camera movement : POV of Jason
Framing: FS of Max
Dialog
Jason : “Here, Max. Have some milk.” After that Max really like it !
Jason : “Do you still want some milk?”
Scene 15
Storyline : Jason stand up and move toward the refrigerator . Jason opened the fridge to get some milk again but his mother told him not to give Max so much because its stomach will easily get full.
Setting : In the kictchen
Camera angle: Eye level
Camera movement: POV of Jason
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